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RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2024.01.17 | 조회 39
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Yes, I think it is better to exercise outdoors than to exercise an exercising in a  gym with equipment.
Because The outside outdoor’s air refreshes me.
And I feel I’m getting healthy.
And For example a gym is too tight.
Because there are many people and one location and gym with  equipment.
There are so many people in a gym that I have to wait to use the exercise equipment.
Therefore, I think it is better to exercise outdoors 


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