해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I often go to go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.
Because I don’t want to get have a lot of new experiences about food.
And I can expend my perspective..
Also I can learn new things such as food and taste.
I can spend on food that suits me through various experiences
-> 중복되는 내용이 많아 정리가 필요합니다. 수고하셨습니다:)
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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