해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I often go to the restaurants outside this neighborhood.

First, the price is very reasonable and attractive.

There days, My budget is so tight these days.economy is so bad.

I’m always worried about my money. my living’s pass.

So, The price is so important for me.

And Second, the food tastes good in general. taste is so good. I can relieve my stress by eating food.

And I can feel happy while have so much fun with eating food.

Therefore I often go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.

-> 문장에서 사소한 실수가 빈번히 발생합니다. 완벽한 문장을 구사하시는 연습이 필요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.