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토익스피킹 첨삭부탁드립니다.
황*라 | 2024.01.23 | 조회 50
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think gym with equipment is better to exercise than outdoors.
First, No matter rains or storms, I can do exercise everyday with don’t care about the weathers.
So I can stately exercise very well.
And Second, In the gym there are some masters call trainers can teach me how to exercise very well.
So I can increase my mussels and healthy very well.
So I think it’s better to exercise gym with the equipment.


※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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