해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is the picture taken in an office.
The first thing I can see is two people standing in front of a copy machine.
They are wearing a suits.
-> 관사를 사용하실 때 유의하시는 것이 좋겠습니다.
And one of them is a man. He is holding some documents.
Next to him, there is a woman. She is looking at the documents with him.
-> 조금 더 구체적인 묘사가 필요합니다.
In the background of the picture, I can see desks, chairs and some two other people.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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