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이*빈 | 2024.01.26 | 조회 57
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I think it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
Let me explain why i think this way.
Most of all we can focus on our exercising.
From my experience about two weeks ago, I visits a gym with my friends.
It was very helpful for us.
Because there are many exercising machine ex treadmill.
So we could focus on our exercising.
On top of them according to a reason to news report 
the majority of people in Korea say that it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
Because they can focus on their exercising.


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