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I think exercise exercising in a gym with equipment would be better.
Because Now days, The air condition is getting worse these days.
And we can also be get health healthier with the help of from other people.
I mean trainers at a gym can teach me how to exercise officially more effectively.
Therefore I think it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
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