해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

Let me explain why I think this way.

First, exercising in a gym is not affected by related to the weather.

On rainy days, snowy days, cloudy days, and too hot days, it is hard to exercise outside,

But you can do it in a gym.

You know when it’s raining or snowing or cloudy something or so hot

We can not exercise outside.

And also, If you exercise in a gym with equipment, you can exercise warm in winter and cool in summer.

it is nice when winter, there is at warm.

In the summer there is

-> 문장에서 많은 오류가 발견됐으며, 주어진 시간에 조금 더 구체적인 답변이 필요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.