첨삭부탁드립니다.

The picture was taken indoors.

The first thing What I can see is four people.

In the front of the picture there is a man who is holding a some papers and he is wearing a gray suit.

Next to him, a woman is holding a cup and looking at a the papers.

In the background of the picture two other peoples are standing.

Generally it looks like a topical day in the company.

-> 전반적으로 잘 묘사해 주셨으나, 문법에서 사소한 오류가 발견됩니다. 수고하셨습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.