해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I usually go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.

Because it is useful to save time.

I don’t want to spend extra time to cooking.

So cooking so it helps me do to the other things I need to do.

It makes me use time especially.

Because I don’t want to waste my precious time.

-> 비슷한 이야기가 반복적으로 나와 생략하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

Therefore I often go to the restaurants outside this neighborhood.

 

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.