해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think to exercise outdoors is better than in a gym with equipment.

Because If I start exercise and I will go gym then Maybe I don’t go everyday.

So I think gym is use money right?

So I use money but I don’t go to gym is so not good.

So I think exercise outdoors is not use money.

So it is very good for my wallet.

And also exercise outdoors is not problem than in a gym with equipment I think.

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