해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise outdoors is better than to exercise in a gym with equipment.

Because It costs money to register at the gym, But it doesn’t cost money to exercise outdoors.

And I don’t think I’ll go to the gym everyday, but it’s a waste of money to do that.

-> 문법에서 많은 오류가 발견됩니다. 하고 싶은 이야기를 정확한 문장으로 표현해 주셔야합니다.

If I start exercise and I will go gym then Maybe I don’t go everyday.

So I think gym is use money right?

So I use money but I don’t go to gym is so not good.

So I think exercise outdoors is not use money.

So it is very good for my wallet.

And Also, exercise outdoors is not problem than in a gym with equipment I think.

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