해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

Most of all, there are many exercise equipment prepared in a gym.

Exercising outdoors requires a lot of preparation.

When I’d like to exercise outdoors, I have to prepare many things.

For example, If I want to play a football outside, I have to prepare many things such as a balls, some cones etc.to exercise.

That’s a very bothersome thing.

Therefore, I think it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

-> 주어진 시간에 맞춰 조금 더 구체적인 의견을 구사해 주시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.