해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

This picture was taken at an office.

What I noticed first a man and a woman are is standing in front of a copy machine.

They are wearing a business suits.

And a the man has a beard and he is holding a some papers.

And Next to him, the woman is holding a cup of coffee and she is smiling.

The background of the picture I can see two other people are standing.

-> 전체적으로 잘 묘사해 주셨지만, 사소한 실수가 발견됩니다.

또한 주어진 시간에 맞춰 묘사하시는 것이 중요합니다. 수고하셨습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.