해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

This picture was taken in the a garden at the house.

-> 묘사의 순서를 바꾸면 조금 더 자연스러울 것 같습니다.

An old man and an old lady in the picture look seem like they are a beautiful old couple against.

They are planting flowers in the a pot together.

And an old lady the woman is trembling wearing a hat and the man has gray hair.is other an old man doesn’t.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.