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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I don’t go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.

Because I am currently working. So I am very busy.

I don’t have enough a time to go to restaurants

and also I feel ~~it is~~ very uncomfortable spending time outside ~~to go outside to spend my time.~~

I really want to relax at home rather than spend ~~take a rest~~

~~instead of spending my~~ time at a restaurant ~~to go the restaurant which is located~~ in ~~outside~~ in my neighborhood.

~~There are why.~~

These are the reasons why I think so.

->사소한 실수와 부자연스러운 문장이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.

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