해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

Most of all we can exercise regardless of the weather.

Last week, I went to a park to go jogging.

Suddenly it was rain.

So, I had to go back to my home.

And If we exercise in a gym also we can run from on export. 

Therefore, I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.