해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

Most of all we can exercise regardless of the weather.

In my case, I went jogging in the park last week. I went to a park to go jogging.

But, suddenly it started raining and was rain.

So, I had no choice but to go home. back to my home.

If I had worked out at a gym, I could run as much as I wanted.

And If we exercise in a gym also we can run from on export. 

Therefore, I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

-> 주어진 시간에 맞춰 조금 더 구체적인 의견이 필요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.