해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

In my opinion, Outdoor exercise is better than in a gym with equipment.

Because there are three reasons.

The first thing is exercising outdoor is more fun.

Because we can enjoy the natural view and other animals and some

We can also some enjoy the changing view 

and some our exercising is more fun.

Also, the second thing is air condition.

In a gym, air condition is very some bad.

Because there are clothes and also people’s sweat smell.

Also it’s how to do our go to gym every day.

The last thing is about a money then.

If we exercise outdoor we do not spend our money for gym then.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.