해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think the picture was taken at an is shoot on the office.

There is are two people are standing on in the front and two another two are standing in back. people on the back.

The people on the in front they are looking at the some documents and talking about those. and printing out from the copy machine.

There are also two people on the back.

And they are blurry.

The two people in the back are walking toward through the two people in front.

-> 부자연스러운 문장이 많이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 주어진 시간에 맞춰 조금 더 구체적인 답변을 작성하시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.