해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think exercise outdoors is better.

Because we can get more energy and feel better.

If the weather is good, we can get a fresh air 

and enjoy the great view While exercising outdoors 

And we can exercise with many other people.

So we can get more energy together.

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