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I think It is better to exercise outdoors. 

It’s because You can breathe good air If you exercise outdoors. if you go exercise outdoors, 

you will take a good condition air.

And Also, you can communicate with other people who are exercising outside. with exercise. 

And you will get effective exercise effect.

And I think you will be able to exercise more effectively.

-> 자신에 생각을 뒷받침 할 만한 구체적인 근거를 제시하시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.

또한 주어진 시간에 맞춰 조금 더 다양한 의견을 제시하시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.