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RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2024.03.17 | 조회 54
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

Let me explain why i think this way.

People prefer to exercise in a gym with equipment

Because they can it is focus on exercising. better.

For my experience, And I think so too. When I was in high school student.

I went to the gym, and I could focus more on exercise than when I exercised outdoors. so it was focus better.

On top of them And according to recent news reports,

the majority of athletes exercise experts


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※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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