해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Two old people are in the middle of the picture. In this picture, there seems to be two elderly people.
A man and a woman are spending time in the a garden.
There are many different types of gardening tools around them.
Such as are a shovel, a rake and baskets. spade and a rocket.
Behind them, I can see green mountains and trees. They also have lots green grass around them.
-> 주어진 그림을 잘 묘사해 주셨지만, 어색한 부분이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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