해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken at an office.
The first thing I can see is a two people looking at a some documents In front of the copy machine.
There is a men who is and he holding a paper
and Next to him, a woman is smiling and looking at the documents he is holding.
They both are wearing a suits.
Behind of them, there is are two other people walking.
And there are a lot of rooms to work.
Overall it looks like a topical seen of office.
-> 사소한 실수가 발견되어 수정이 필요했지만, 전체적으로 주어진 그림을 잘 묘사해 주셨습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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