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이*언 | 2024.04.10 | 조회 57
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I think it is better to exercise outdoors.
There are some reasons why I think so.
First, I can refresh air. So I feel refreshed.
And it makes me happy.
Second, I can enjoy outdoor’s activities with my friends.
For example tennis, badminton, soccer and softball.
Let me explain more examples.
A few years ago, I and my friends went to outdoor’s park.
We enjoyed many activities exercise.


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