해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
In my opinion exercise in a gym is better than exercise outdoors.
Because in the gym there is a lot of equipments and such as squats, leg extension, barbell, and dumb-bell and weights places.
So by this equipments you can develop your muscles very well.
And also there is another advantage in the gym.
That means you can exercise in the gym like outdoor.
There are treadmill so overall in think gym is better than outdoors.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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