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RE:해커스 토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다!!
첨삭지기 | 2024.04.22 | 조회 58
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

In my opinion, Exercising exercise in a gym is better than exercise exercising outdoors. 

Because in the gym thereis a lot of many equipment, and such as squat, leg extension, barbell and ,dumb-bell and weights places are in a gym. 

So by this equipments you can increase develop your muscle mass with these exercises equipment.very well.

And also there is another advantage in a the gym.

That means  There are treadmills in a gym. So, you can exercise in a the gym like you’re exercising outdoor. 

There are treadmill so overall

For these reasons, I think exercising in a gym is better than outdoors. 



※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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