[UNIT 1] 자기소개
My name is youngjin kim.
I am 29 years old.
I live in an apartment in Gyeongsangbuk-do with my parents.
There are four people in my family, my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.
I am currently looking for a job, and i just graduated from a college university academy.
My major is a railroad railway engineer.
I would like to find a position as a subway engineer position.
I think i am a curious person.
I like to cook in my free time.
The reason is that I want to make new food and serve it to my favorite people.
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