해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is the a picture taken in an office.
The first thing I can see from this picture is that two people are standing.
One of them is a man and he is holding a some papers.
And they have long hair
Next to him is a woman and she is holding a coffee.
They seem to be having a conversation about paper.
Behind them, there are two other people standing.
A front of them another people are standing in lobby.
And I can see.
-> 문장에서 다소 어색한 부분이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다.
주어진 그림에 대한 조금 더 구체적인, 정확한 묘사가 필요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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