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Amy | 2024.05.19 | 조회 81

<나의 사무실-위치, 생김새, 마음에드는지>


It’s a good question because I’m very happy with my job and workplace.

I’ve been working for a fashion company in Seoul for about a year.

Actually, it’s located in 성수, which is very trendy area. And I’m very happy about it.

The name of the company is Gray, and it is online brand which mainly handle high quality office wear for women.


Okay, so let me tell you more about my workplace.

The office building I work in is 20 stories tall, and our firm is located on the 3rd floor.

The building is gray on the outside, and I would say it is a fairly new building.

So, when you walk into the office, you can see lots of cubicles.

Each cubicles has a desk and a computer, and is enclosed by gray partitions.


What makes my office special is that there’s a small park right next to the office which have some sports equipments.

So every lunch break, after having lunch, I go to the park and do some exercise.

It’s good for digestion and also helps to keep my body shape.


All in all, I think my office is a pretty decent place to work in.

So, I can say I’m happy with my workplace. 


<업무를 하는 경양-책임, 업무>


As I said in the previous questions, I work for a fashion company in Seoul.

I’ve been working for this company about a year, and I’ve been enjoying it very much.

So, let me tell you about my tasks at work.


At my work, I’m responsible for designing clothes for new season.

And it includes managing all the following business, from market research to handling factories.

I really like working independently, which I get to do at my current work.


As for my typical day at work , I get to my office around 8:50.

First off, my typical day usually begins by checking all the materials we need to pick up from fabric market.

Then I do market research and have a meeting for new ideas with team members.

For the rest of my day, I develop new designs and samples.


For the most part, I feel like my job is very rewarding.

If you ask me if there was a downside of my job, I would say the only downside is that it can be super busy at times.

But I can’t complain because I really like what I do.


<직장에서 겪은 문제-어떤문제, 해결, 결과>


Actually, I’ve only been working for a couple of years, so I haven’t faced many problems at work yet.

But I remember a time I faced an especially difficult problem.

I think it happened about 3 months ago.


I was assigned the task of searching fabrics for summer pajamas.

Our director game me some references of the fabrics which is modernized rosy pattern.

But when I went to the fabric market, I couldn’t find the exact same fabric.

So after 3 hours of searching, I gave up and went back to the office with similar floral patterns.

But those were not what she wanted. So I needed to search the fabric again.

But by the sample I picked up, she explained specific color and style she want. 

So it was way easier for me to find the samples. 


To search the fabric, I needed to go to the market 2 times more.

But in the end, I found the perfect fabric for the design.

I remember I was very relieved because we didn’t have much time left.

Anyway, I would say it was memorable experience I had at work.

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