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한*민 | 2024.05.22 | 조회 50
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment. 

Most of all it is helpful to concentrate of exercise. 

Last year, I registered a business center.

So, I  used to about gym equipment such as treadmill.

And I get a heather my body and I interested in using about gym with equipment. 

As winter, I know how to use equipment. 

So it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

 



※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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