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RE:첨삭 답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2024.05.22 | 조회 61

1. There are so many gatherings in our country

Among them, We celebrate some days like such as birthdays and graduations days. 

We usually get together at restaurants or bars that are so delicious. normally gather at some spaces which are so delicious restaurants or bar. 

Recently, When my birthday, My friends and me made had a party at a cocktail bar on my birthday. 

At that time, I drank drunk a lot then. 

Yes It was a great so nice time.

So, People in out county Our country’s ppl are usually enjoy these This kind of gathering !

That’s the answer to of this question.


-> 질문에 대한 답변을 잘 작성해 주셨지만. 문장에서 어색한 문법과 사소한 오류가 자주 반복됩니다. 완벽한 문장을 작성하시는 것이 중요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다. 

2.When I was young,child, I think that it was spring. my mom took me at to the park to jog. That was my first time to jog in the park. There were so many beautiful flowers. It's like a picture. I was like " WoW, It's soooo beautiful" And also, after jogging, we ate sandwich in itthere. That was my first experience in about jogging. It was a really good so nice memory
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