전등이 고장 났고, 해결하려는 상황입니다.
Suddenly, there is a problem with the lights.
So, I immediately bought the new lights immediately.
After nine o’clock at night, the house became dark.
but it was already 9pm. and it was dark outside.
I had no choice but to go to bed early. sleep a day,
So, I changed the lights as soon as i woke up at 7am, i replaced the light.
I remember it took me an hour to change the lights.
-> 사소한 실수와 어색한 문장이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다.
조금 더 완벽한 문장을 완성하셔야 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.




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