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김*희 | 2024.06.24 | 조회 96
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

There are couple of reasons to support my opinion.

First, i can use a variety of exercise equipment.

It gives me positive energy.

And it is relieve my stress.

Also, it is possible to run fun professionals.

They have expertise exercises.

Therefore i think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.



※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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