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RE:오픽(자기소개) 첨삭 답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2024.06.27 | 조회 111
Hello, My name is Kim, and I am 30 years old. I am an office worker. I have worked at public institution for five years. I am a full-time regular employee of in the Export marketing Department. I support export marketing of small and medium-sized enterprises. I think I am a caring person. I think this is an important characteristic trait if you are supporting work in support. I am currently single. I live alone in an apartment. My home is close to the Han River Park. In my free time, I like taking a walk with my dog to enjoy nature. This is my favorite pastime.

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