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I think exercise outdoors is better than exercise in a gym with a equipment
for a couple of reasons.
First, exercise outdoors provide you exercise makes you more healthy.
For example, you can get fresh air by exercising outdoors.
Second, you can enjoy sunset.
It’s revitalizing your life.
Exercise outdoors provide you enjoying the sunset.
For these reasons i think.
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