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I think the outdoor exercise outdoors is better than the exercise in a gym with an  equipment for several a couple of reasons. 

First, exercising outdoors can make you healthier. 

provide you exercise makes you more healthy. 

For example, exercising outdoors allows you to breathe fresh air.

 you can get fresh air by exercising outdoors.

Second, you can enjoy the sunset.

It’s revitalizing your life.

If you exercise outdoors, you can enjoy the sunset.

Exercise outdoors provide you enjoying the sunset.

For these reasons, I think. 

-> 완벽한 문장을 구사하시는 것이 중요할 것 같습니다.

수고하셨습니다.