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토익스피킹 첨삭부탁드립니다.
신*민 | 2024.07.08 | 조회 92
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Actually I recommend It’s better to exercise outdoor than in a gym.

Because outside is very refreshments air fresher.

And easily do the exercise if what I want.

So and now days, many places around outside.

We normally see the exercise tools around there.

So we don’t need to use our money for the exercise in a gym.

Actually we should spend out money for doing exercise.

It isn’t bot recommended what I think.

what i think is it is not recommended. 



※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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