해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Actually I recommend It’s better to exercise outdoor than in a gym.
Because outside is very refreshments air fresher.
And easily do the exercise if what I want.
So and now days, many places around outside.
We normally see the exercise tools around there.
So we don’t need to use our money for the exercise in a gym.
Actually we should spend out money for doing exercise.
It isn’t bot recommended what I think.
what i think is it is not recommended.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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