해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
The first thing I noticed that this picture was taken at an office.
And In front of a printer, there are two people.
They are talking to each other.
And they are wearing the business suits like black and white.
And In the background of the photo it looks like an office building.
Seems like they seem to be are talking about a the meeting stuff.
Seems like they seem to be are working happier here. with this place.
-> 어색한 부분이 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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