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lec 04, 7~14 첨삭 부탁드립니다.
남궁이 | 2024.07.08 | 조회 115

lec 04

 

07 (tv광고의 장점)

 

First, many people can watch TV advertisements before starting next tv program.

By watching advertisement, they wait next tv program.

 

Second, TV advertisement is exposed to TV viewers. and they memory about it.

 

 

08 (가장 좋은 방법 – 개인지도)

 

First, Teaching one-on-one is focusing on the children perfectly.

Children can more improve their ability than other methods.

 

Second, children can ask their questions anytime.

They can ask them easily.

 

09 (컴퓨터 게임을 해선 안된다)

 

First, Playing computer game makes our children badly.

Nowadays, Internets show users about bad contents.

 

Second, They should focus on studying.

In Korea, our society is very competitive.

 

10 (농장 방문시 얻을 수 있는 장점들)

First, They can harvest various crops in person.

It will good experience to them.

 

Second, They can learn how to harvest crops.

They will be broaden their perspectives.

 

11 (경력직 채용시 장점)

 

First, They are skiiled at everything.

So, The company don’t need to teach them.

 

Second, They are work almost perfectly.

So they don’t make any problems.

 

12 (직장 회식 장점)

First, We can save our money. Thesedays, the price of food increase more and more.

 

Second, We can close to our team people. We can relieve our stress from the work.

 

13 (스스로 트레이닝 받는 장점)

 

First, We can look What we don’t know something repeatedly. It is very convenient.

 

Second, We can learn everything from program. We don’t need have to sorry with our seniors.

 

14 (멀티테스킹 단점)

 

First, Doing something at the same time makes me confused.

It will give me a lot of stress.

 

Second, If I am not good at my work, It is meaningless.

I should concentrate on just one thing.

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