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RE:오픽 답변 첨삭 답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2024.07.13 | 조회 92
I still live in the area where I grew up. Even though It's the same
area, but there is a difference are differences between the past and today’s. how it
was in the past and how it is today.

Let's start with how it Let me tell you what my old area looked like. used to be.
Actually, I don’t remember clearly the memories are not clear.
But to I’ll tell you what I remember, It was a very quiet neighborhood. There were not many buildings, and there was a farming field around.
It was an underdeveloped place where I could to even hear the sound of a chicken crying in the morning.
And also There were a few small academies and
local marts.

On the other hand, the neighborhood is much
busier these days.
Industrial complexes have been built, and restaurants have been opened more than before in the past. Recently, other apartments have been built.
Of course, I still think it's a quiet neighborhood.
But It is has become more convenient place and easy easier to go get to than before in the past.

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