날씨 때문에 기억에 남는 경험(Have ever experienced something memorable because of the weather?...)
I went to an amusement park in 경주, it was just called 경주world.
And then when I was about going to ride a roller coaster, and you know what?
But you know, it was really unexpected. Because cuz the weather was nice just before that.. so unfortunately, I couldn't ride it.
So I was really disappointed, because that roller coaster is really popular in there. But you know, there was nothing else I could do.. that'why it's because of the rain...
Anyway, I'll go back again and ride that rollercoaster
-> 전반적으로 수정이 필요했습니다. 완벽하게 정리된 문장을 작성하시는 것이 중요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.




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