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RE:날씨 때문에 기억에 남는 경험  첨삭답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2024.07.15 | 조회 76
날씨 때문에 기억에 남는 경험(Have ever experienced something memorable because of the weather?...)

Something memorable..?
Alright, well.. I’ve even experienced something memorable because of the weather.
I went to an amusement park in 경주, it was just called 경주world. 
And then when I was about going to ride a roller coaster, and you know what?
Just out of nowhere, Suddenly, it started raining.
But you know, it was really unexpected. Because cuz the weather was nice just before that.. so unfortunately, I couldn't ride it.
So I was really disappointed, because that roller coaster is really popular in there. But you know, there was nothing else I could do.. that'why it's because of the rain...
Anyway, I'll go back again and ride that rollercoaster

-> 전반적으로 수정이 필요했습니다. 완벽하게 정리된 문장을 작성하시는 것이 중요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

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