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RE:오픽 첨삭 답변드립니다
첨삭지기 | 2024.07.13 | 조회 88
It was one day when I was straightening up my house. I was organizing my house one day. While organizing a bookshelf, I found my mother's diary. it was a diary that my mom had written since she was a teenager. I was so fascinated and excited to meet my mom's youth.
And the content was so cute and lovely. There were some moments when she was sad or frustrated. And also there was a love story with my dad. It was so much fun. I couldn't finish cleaning the house that day because I was reading the diary.
But it was so meaningful.

-> 전반적으로 잘 작성해 주셨습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

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