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OPic 자전거 타기 첨삭 부탁드립니다.
오픽 | 2024.07.17 | 조회 107
[자전거를 타는 경향]: I use my bike to get around whenever the weather is nice. I usually take the bike path along the Han River that runs through the middle of Seoul. It usually takes no more than 30 minutes to reach my usual destinations using this path. I ride my bike to the Han River more than once a week. I see the scenery around me while riding my bike, and sometimes I eat noddle at the Han River when I am hungry. I personally think that using a bike as a form of transportation is a lot more fun than driving a car or taking the subway. I don’t have to sit in traffic of navigate through corwds of people, and I get a good workout withou any hassle. I always look forward to these rides.

[자전거를 타다 겪은 경험]: One memorable experience for me was when I was listening to music while biking a ride. I usually biked with the volume up, and I was listening to very exciting music. Unfortunately, I wasn't paying enough attention as I fell in love with the music. As I was about to cross the crosswalk, I looked up, and found that I was rushing straight at a car in front of me. The driver was honking furiously, but I didn't hear anything. After this, I don't use the noise cancellation on my AirPods. I also ride my bike with the volume adjusted that I can hear outside sounds.

[자전거를 타게 된 계기와 변화]: I first learned to ride a bicycle when i turned nine. My partents had given me one for my birthday. I was over the moon to have my own. My dad taught me how to ride the bike at a park near my house. The first few times I attempted to do it, he had to hold me up and help me out. It was hard to keep my balance, so I fell over a lot. However, he continued to encourage me, so I kept on trying. From that day on, I made sure to practice every day. Since then, i’ve definitely learned the ropes. Now, I can even bike on challenging mountain trails with confidence.
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