해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
The picture was taken in the office.
And there are four people in the picture.
Two of them are in front of the copy machine.
and watching they are looking at the documents he is holding.
And He has a beard.
The left side of people The other two in the back are watching the two people in front of the copy machine.
And the man is holding a document is having a beard.
-> 조금 더 구체적으로 그림에 대해 묘사해 주신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다!
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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