해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is a picture taken outdoors.
The first thing I can see from this picture is two people planting flowers in their pots. something.
A woman is wearing a hat and a blue t-shirt.
Next to her, a man with white hair is wearing a green t-shirt and white hair.
In the background of the picture, there are several they’re some trees and mountains.
-> 전반적으로 그림을 잘 묘사해 주셨지만 조금 더 자연스러운 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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