해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is a picture taken at an office.
The first thing I can see from this picture is that there are two people standing.
One of them is a man. He is holding some papers.
The other is a woman. she has is holding a cup of coffee. a black hair.
They are wearing a formal clothes and looking at the the papers he is hiding.
In the background of the picture, there are two other people standing.
-> 주어진 시간 안에 조금 더 구체적인 묘사를 해주신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
0
