해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This photo was taken outdoors.
The first thing What I can see is the two people in the middle.
They are planting a flowers in their pot.
And On the right side of the picture, a woman is wearing a hat and a blue T-shirt.
Next to her, there is a man wearing a green T-shirt.
and she wearing a blue shirt.
On In the background of the picture, many flowers are planted on the lawn grass.
And I can see a big mountain.
Generally it looks like a typical day in outdoors.
-> 주어진 그림에 대한 묘사를 하는 것이 중요합니다. 다소 어색한 부분이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다.
수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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